Tuesday, March 26, 2013

Tired



I TRIED to write the following poem, but I'm so very tired...Any input/ideas for revising/improving/finishing???

So much to say
So much to do

When will this long day
Finally be through?

Too tired to think
Too tired to play

When will I get sleep
What do you say?

Early to bed
Early to rise

Makes a man
Healthy, wealthy, and wise.

That's what I've heard
That's surely the truth

Never to bed early
What on earth!   (worth?  other rhyming words)

2 comments:

  1. I'm jealous the way poetry is natural for you...I need LOTS of time to craft a poem. Or maybe I just need time to let go of the words and let them be free. Nevertheless, I understand a full day. I'm on my way to bed now! Looking forward to seeing you tomorrow.
    Ruth

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  2. I think the poem if great for a tired teacher. Two more days and you can sleep! Enjoy your days with family next week.

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